Be Careful what you wish for – The real chapter 1 of the story of Nessa, Calanor and Jenna

by Apr 29, 2003Stories

There are two elves in a place called Rivendell. There names are Nessa and Calanor . Nessa has Dirty Blonde hair down to her waist, Grey-blue eyes and she always wears a silver locket. Calanor unlike most elves has short hair. He has Blue green eyes and always wears a golden ring with a blue stone on it. He also can’t see half as good as most elves. These two elves are both 1112 years old and have been friends sience they were 400 years old. They also both have a thirst for adventure. Their thirst will soon be quenched.

Every night Nessa wishes for a adventure and to see new places. Every night Calanor wishes to meet his true love. Both of there wishes will come true!

One day the two friends are at Nessa’s house. They are Bored Calanor suggests they go for a walk.

So the two friends go walking. The forest is very peaceful, the sound of birds chirping and the wind rustling the leaves. It is late spring and there are pink, purple and light blue flowers dotted through out the green scenery. They hadn’t been walking long when they hear a noise behind them.

” what’s that noise? ” asks Nessa

They turn around to see five Goblins about fifteen feet behind them. The goblins have knifes and two have bow and arrows. They start to run for they have no weapons with them. They run for about 10 minutes. The goblins follow them. The two with bow and arrows shot them each time Nessa or Calanor just get out of the way in time. They turn a corner the goblins are just out of site they see a old oak tree with a hole in it, just big enough to fit through. The run over to it and go in side.

When they got inside they expected to be squashed but it turns out there is quite a lot of room. It smells musty and barky. They can’t see anything except for a bit of sunlight streaming through the hole from which they entered. They still can here the noise of the goblins coming yelling and cursing there is a flash of light and They are thrown to the ground and knocked out. Then the world around them starts to swirl in many colors. Red, Blue, yellow, green, pink, purple, orange and white. Then they are in room

The room is painted Blood red and there are posters of actors and bands covering most of the walls. In on corner there is a CD player, In another corner there is a computer and in another corner there is a desk piled up with papers. In the middle of the room there is a bed and on that bed is a 16 year old girl.

The girl has hair down to her waist dyed black with purple and blue highlights. Her original eye color is green but at this time she is wearing eye contacts to make her eyes black. She has three piercings on each ear. She is wearing blue jeans and a black sweater. She has a silver bracelet on and a golden ring with a blue stone on it just like Calanor’s.

The two elves get up rubbing their heads. Then they stand there memorized by their transportation and the modern technology that they have never seen before. The girl is the first to speak.

” Who are you and how did you get here? ”

” My name is Calanor and this is my friend Nessa. And we honestly don’t know how we got here. Who are you? asks Calanor

” My name is Jenna and where did you come from? ” says Jenna.

” We’ve come from a place called middle earth” says Nessa

” Do you know how to get back? ” asks Jenna

” No we didn’t try to get here. We were trying to hide from orcs when there was a flash of light and here we are” says Calanor

” What are orcs? ” asks Jenna

” You don’t want to know ” says Nessa

” Well then if you don’t know how to get back it seems that you’ll have to stay here until we can find a way to get you home. ” Says Jenna

” Are you sure you don’t mind keeping us? asks Nessa

” No problimo. How old are you guys anyways ? You look around what 16″ says Jenna

” Actually we’re 1112 years old. ” says Calanor

” Wow you look good for your age! ” says Jenna

” Actually we’re quite young for elves are immortal we can only die of a broken heart or when in battle. We are immune from disease and age. ” says Nessa

” Well for you to stay I’ll have to take you to school with me, mum and dad have to work and I can’t leave you here alone. ” says Jenna

” School? ” asks Calanor

” I’ll explain later I think we should just get a good nights sleep. Oh yah and if you come to my school you’ll have to change your names. Calanor and Nessa aren’t popular names around here. How about Calanor is Bruce and Nessa you’ll be Lisa. ” says Jenna

” Alright I like the name Bruce ” says Calanor

” Good night ” says Jenna

” Good night ” says Nessa

” Good night ” says Calanor

So the three go to bed. Nessa in Jenna’s bed and Jenna and Calanor on the floor. And Nessa has dreams of adventure in her temporary home. Calanor has dreams
of finding his true love.


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