A pain runs deep,
within my soul
it seems as if
it will never go
i try to assit it
and make is dissapere
but it just lingers around
and does what it wishes
it has strong times
but also week
im not strong enough
i always loose the battle
so that is why
im on this quest
the ring has taken over
and i’ve lost controle
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The dead marhes through the eyes of a child who witnessed it. Though it may be your initial reponse, please keep in mind that it is not based off any real characture from Lord of the Rings. I made this one all up. Please comment.
Some people asked me to expand this poem. I didn’t want it to sound too forced, but I finally did it.
A farewell to a gentle friend.
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