by Mar 24, 2005Poetry

Who am I?
You won’t call for me, no
You told me to go back
I stray back down the rough rocks
I slip, I fall
Tears, neverending tears
cloud my vision ferociously
Who am I?
Do I go back, like you said you wanted
Or do I return to you, my master
I made a promise
Do I break my heart-filled vow
Or do I risk everything by turning back now?
my choice has vanished
I know what I must do
I know that I must sacrifice myself
Because I must save you


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