Is this what was meant to be? - A poem

Yeah..I know. There are lots of these. I have written several poems, but this is my first LOTR's one. I don't know how good it is so I would appreciate your comments.

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Another day is over
Another day is past
I cannot seem to cover
My dread that they might last

Each minute seems an hour
Each hour to me a day
He triumphs as I cower
Is there no other way

The Wheel of fire in my mind
Bends me to it's will
There is no peace for me to find
For it's desire is to kill

This road before me is long
I know though I cannot see
My heart no longer hears a song
Is this what was meant to be?

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