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Evenstar at Twilight
May 4, 2004
Submitted By erinhue
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Now that your king is gone?
Now all the ships have sought the West
That should have been your home?
To what will your heart hearken
Now that his voice is still
Now all your kin have left you
In accordance with your will
Where will your soul find comfort
Now that your lover sleeps
Now all the halls and golden wood
Are fading as you weep
Arwen Undomiel
Her people's EvenStar
With beauty like Tinuviel
Not even time cold mar
Your people sailed without you
To reach the Western shore
For sake of Love
You chose to stay
And see them never more
So wither shall you wander
Now that the king's called home
And how to face the lonely years
In Middle Earth
Alone
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Very very pretty. I think you captured her dilemma well. Keep writing!
Comment by arico960 - May 4, 2004 @ 11:35 AM
that was sooooo cool but I think the title should be differnet it doesn't really fit all that much but that is ok you are the auther and the Auther choses the title. anywho that was a great poem it made me feel all spiffy inside.
Comment by lady_nande - May 4, 2004 @ 3:05 PM
That was just beautiful to read! What a wonderful portayal of Arwen's sorrow.
~Lindar
Comment by Lindar_of_the_Sea - May 5, 2004 @ 5:22 PM
you probably wont recognize me, i left you a post at your thread about your problem. anyway great great beautiful poem. you have inspired me to write one. thanks
Comment by LEGOLAS_ESTELSTAR - May 7, 2004 @ 7:15 PM
*saves it to her 'fave poems' file*
BEAUTIFUL!! Best one I've read all day...and I've read at least 8...
I love how you rhymed the words and how the words create each scene vividly in your head...
I like the secomnd and last parts the best... "And how to face the lonely years, In Middle Earth,Alone." awesome...those lines give me chills...
Lovely...and I want more!
*applause*
Comment by elusiveexistance - May 13, 2004 @ 9:02 AM
hey, I'm a poet myself and that was absolutely beautiful and I'm not hesitant or embarrassed to say that I was in tears. You have really captured Arwen's grief and I want you to e-mail me please at Lynsey_licious@yahoo.co.uk
and see for your rating: 5++++++++++++
Comment by Hobityla - May 23, 2004 @ 12:47 PM