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Brave Hearts - A true story in disguise
June 27, 2003
Submitted By erinhue
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Before the world began to be
Two hearts eternally entwined
Together from the start of time.
Now every soul must do God's work
And sundered, they were sent to earth
To take on lives of flesh and bone
And wander through the world alone
But miracles on earth abound
And so the lost were one day found
Two halves were once again made whole
And Heaven's joy infused both souls
The Darkness hates Love's boundless joy
And all its power would employ
And all its cunning strength extend
To bring Love to its saddest end
And thus the lovers found their way
Turned rocky, rough and shrouded gray
And everything in Life conspired
To make them both of Love grow tired
To pull the cojoined souls apart
And have them break each other's heart
But Love is strong when it runs true
What Darkness sought it could not do
Together still they walk along
Rejoicing in each other's song
Still loving as the years go by
Together 'til the day they die.
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... 15 Comments
Love forever, and a message of hope, truly insperational
Comment by lotrfreak98 - June 27, 2003 @ 2:23 PM
Love forever, and a message of hope, truly insperational
Comment by lotrfreak98 - June 27, 2003 @ 2:23 PM
that was good. and what lotrfreak98 said, it is insperational. I loved it.
Comment by Arenial - June 27, 2003 @ 4:03 PM
that was good. and what lotrfreak98 said, it is insperational. I loved it.
Comment by Arenial - June 27, 2003 @ 4:03 PM
I just love it!
Comment by *Faenlim* - June 28, 2003 @ 5:27 AM
I just love it!
Comment by *Faenlim* - June 28, 2003 @ 5:27 AM
So beautiful, and so true. Thank you for sharing this with us, Erinhue!
Comment by Elven*Warrior - June 28, 2003 @ 7:57 AM
So beautiful, and so true. Thank you for sharing this with us, Erinhue!
Comment by Elven*Warrior - June 28, 2003 @ 7:57 AM
This is an absolutely beautiful poem. Is there anyone in particular that you wrote this about?
Comment by Aldariel - June 28, 2003 @ 4:36 PM
This is an absolutely beautiful poem. Is there anyone in particular that you wrote this about?
Comment by Aldariel - June 28, 2003 @ 4:36 PM
Like they said beautiful and insperational!
Comment by ~Arwen_Evenstar925~ - June 29, 2003 @ 6:50 AM
Like they said beautiful and insperational!
Comment by ~Arwen_Evenstar925~ - June 29, 2003 @ 6:50 AM
I don't know why, that made me really sad...Brilliant, Erinhue!
Comment by Periannath - June 29, 2003 @ 6:33 PM
I don't know why, that made me really sad...Brilliant, Erinhue!
Comment by Periannath - June 29, 2003 @ 6:33 PM
It's nice and beautiful, and so true of love. Good job describing love's ups and downs, and how souls meet and depart.
Comment by fishy071 - January 21, 2004 @ 4:52 AM